Wolfpack Harem Dating Game

So, first off with this one, it's not appearing on the itch index for some reason? Like I generally keep tabs of "furry" and "adult + furry" for the last 30 days open and I haven't seen this at all. Shouldn't be an issue since you're not charging for it, but the only reason I found this is by going to your profile page from the Renamon game to see if you'd been up to anything since then. Not sure why that's happening or if it's just a problem on my end.

For substantive feedback, there's a line during the fight with our first ulfheddin (I understood that reference :) ) along the lines of "This is moving way too fast, lady!" and I... kinda agree with protag-kun there. I know we're still in the proof of concept stage where a lot of things are subject to change, and there's definitely a desire to get to the titties ASAP to keep players' attention, but the pacing could definitely be a bit more refined in the intro. 

Right now everything feels kinda abrupt and the MC feels very passive, mostly just accepting everything Brynn says instead of questioning why he's in this situation, whether he wants to participate, or considering at any point that his purpose for being there in the first place was literally to kill her. 

Not something I'm usually quick to suggest, but the intro fight could actually benefit a lot from some more exposition. I'm not advocating for long lore-dumping monologues, but I think some banter during the fight would go a long way. Give some insight into why Brynn is out hunting for husbands - "All of our males were killed! We need strong men to save our tribe!" that sort of thing. 

Lore-wise, you can also jump off from here and clarify things like why they want humans instead of other monster-types, or whether that's not relevant, and you can set up both Brynn and MC a bit more too. When MC accidentally cuts off Brynn's top, she can become visibly flustered and/or horny, which MC takes advantage of by taunting her and intentionally cutting off her bottoms. This would show that the MC is both cunning enough to spot the weakness and skilled enough to exploit it (i.e., successfully targeting the clothing instead of just trying to chop her head off) to defeat a physically stronger opponent, qualities Brynn could find befitting of her desired warrior husband. This could also convey the extent to which the wolf tribe's male deprivation has been affecting her.

I'd also conclude the fight with the MC making a conscious decision to abandon the contract and join the wolves while he's holding Brynn at sword point, whether that be because he thinks it's better strategically for him in the long run than a one-time sum of 500 gold, or because he really wants that wolf pussy, or both, so you can dispose of that plot point (unless and until it comes back up again later) and make Brynn proceeding to jump him on the spot a little less, uh, forced.

Don't have much to say about the other girls around camp yet since right now we're still mostly at archetypes (the ditz, the tsundere, the mommy, etc.) but they all look fantastic, as does Brynn. Take or leave any of the above input, but I'm honestly pretty excited about this. I think there's a foundation for a really fun romp here, it would just benefit from smoothing out the edges a bit.

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